Review or Comment on "The Moonflower Festival", by Emma Grant

[emmagrant01]

Read "The Moonflower Festival", then submit your reviews or comments here.* Thanks for reading!


* Flames will be deleted. Constructive criticism is welcome!

Comments

[bingis.livejournal.com]

What? No posts?! My god! Shame on the fandom! Shame! There be more to Emma than just Left My Heart, you know.

Seriously...The Moon Flower Festival is just great. The set up is a little awkward,(but hey, anything to get Obi to give Jinn a blow job right?) but once the Jedi enter the festival and the rules and rituals become clear *snicker snort* one just gets swept up in teh tide. In read it, I almost felt like I could see and smell the flowers, it was so beautiful. And unlike Left my Heart, it lacks that mind numb agnst that makes you want to slap the characters and just say "Make sweet passionate love to each other already!"

Not that angst is bad. Moon Flower fows like water, and has a sweet texture to it, you know what I mean? Very lovely.

[emmagrant01.livejournal.com]

Oh, wow! A review! Actually, I just put this post up as a comment form about a week ago, so you're the first to use it!

Moonflower was my very first Q/O fic, and the first long fic I ever wrote. It was posted a year and a half ago, so now I read it peeking through my fingers! I've debated whether or not I should go back and rewrite some of it, but I think I'll probably leave it alone. Thanks so much for reading it!