Review or Comment on "The Moonflower Festival", by Emma Grant

[emmagrant01]

Read "The Moonflower Festival", then submit your reviews or comments here.* Thanks for reading!


* Flames will be deleted. Constructive criticism is welcome!

Comments

[bingis.livejournal.com]

What? No posts?! My god! Shame on the fandom! Shame! There be more to Emma than just Left My Heart, you know.

Seriously...The Moon Flower Festival is just great. The set up is a little awkward,(but hey, anything to get Obi to give Jinn a blow job right?) but once the Jedi enter the festival and the rules and rituals become clear *snicker snort* one just gets swept up in teh tide. In read it, I almost felt like I could see and smell the flowers, it was so beautiful. And unlike Left my Heart, it lacks that mind numb agnst that makes you want to slap the characters and just say "Make sweet passionate love to each other already!"

Not that angst is bad. Moon Flower fows like water, and has a sweet texture to it, you know what I mean? Very lovely.

[emmagrant01.livejournal.com]

Oh, wow! A review! Actually, I just put this post up as a comment form about a week ago, so you're the first to use it!

Moonflower was my very first Q/O fic, and the first long fic I ever wrote. It was posted a year and a half ago, so now I read it peeking through my fingers! I've debated whether or not I should go back and rewrite some of it, but I think I'll probably leave it alone. Thanks so much for reading it!

[amentiturtle.livejournal.com]

Most definitely amazing!! I just came across your journal 2 days ago, and have devoured every word of Left my Heart, and then the website was down, and last night, I read this one. And WOWIE!! I am in awe! You write these beautiful pieces of love and feeling and story, and then all the yummy sexual tension and release... and wow.... You leave me speechless! You're descriptions of the emotional turmoil bring me to tears, and then they finally give in to love, and just wow.. did I mention wow? (sorry, you have stupefied me.) Only one criticism... could you make Tuesday come sooner? Oh well, I have all your other writings to catch up on.

You are a goddess! Thank you.

[emmagrant01.livejournal.com]

I just realized I never thanked you for leaving this comment! Sorry for the delay, and please know that I appreciate it very much!

[circe-tigana.livejournal.com]

Dude, this was fucking hot :)

[emmagrant01.livejournal.com]

Wow, thanks! *grins* Are you reading all my fic? If so, I'm incredibly flattered and amazed!

Oh, and this fic was the first slash I ever wrote! *hides face* I haven't read it myself in at least a year and a half... :-P

[circe-tigana.livejournal.com]

heeeeee. Jedi porn is my new sekkrit shame. I spent the weekend with fearlessdiva and she converted me to the mind!wiped!pleasure!slave lust ;)

I thought this was really good for first slash, dude. Hell, for any slash. The twins threesome stuff was hot and there was SERIOUS UST.

another useless post for you.

[wellowned.livejournal.com]

just so you know, you wrote my very first threesome. (heh, you popped my threesome cherry!)

very hot. i dig your work. i read all the qaj stuff, and i'm sad that season three isn't started yet. but... you rock.

Re: another useless post for you.

[emmagrant01.livejournal.com]

Thanks for commenting on this! I appreciate it.

And hey, it was the first threesome I ever wrote, so... *grins*

wow

[(Anonymous)]

wow...that was your first? it was freakin' amazing!! you did a really great job making everything very clear. i'm jealous. ;-)

Andra

Re: wow

[emmagrant01.livejournal.com]

Yes, the very first one! Thanks for letting me know you enjoyed it!

[(Anonymous)]

Eeeeee!

I'm up to Part 2 and I had to leave an all praising message. It's SO freakin' good. The characters, emotions, setting and everything seems so real the way you describe it. I can almost smell the intoxicating smell of the Moonflower petals.

I love it so far,

Greer

[emmagrant01.livejournal.com]

Oh, thanks so much for commenting when you haven't even finished the fic!

Beautiful story

[(Anonymous)]

That was a beautiful story. Very, very sexy. I think when I die I want heaven to be Primale at Mooflower festival. A wonderful work of imagination. Thank you. As a gay man who appreciates the sexual allure of women, I found your story to be quite simply one of the most exciting I have ever read. Wonderful - lucky Obi-wan.

[gunxshyed.livejournal.com]

I'm relatively new to the Q/O fandom, and was super pleased to find, finally, an incredible, mindblowingly sexy fic about them. I have also recced it recently in my journal-if you would like to read the full write-up, please mosey on over here:

Moonflower Lovefest

Thank you for writing such wonderful stuff...I'd be more eloquent, but it's like 1:30. (That's why I linked you to my lovefest, lol. I was much more coherent then.)

Moonflower

[chizu-sando.livejournal.com]

Hot damn! That fic was... well, really hot. It certainly gave me a new appreciation for rimming. Now I need to go dust off my toys. See ya! ;D

Great slash!

[(Anonymous)]

Wow, that was amazing! The bonus threesome was definitely welcome! Very hot. And a happy conclusion with awesome Jedi sex!