Hoo boy.

[emmagrant01]

Okay, I'm so going to hell for this.

Look, if you click, read the warnings, okay?

jedirita, you might not want to know. Seriously.

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About the POV...

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I was re-reading this ficlet this morning, and I realized that I *switched* from 3rd person present to 3rd person past about halfway through! :^P I never noticed it yesterday! Where is my brain?

Anyway, I decided to change the whole thing to past tense, as that seemed easier than converting the second half to present tense. And now I'm curious -- what do you think, since I've eliminated the annoyance factor?