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Title: Just a Kiss (1/6)
Author: Emma Grant
Fandom: Sherlock BBC
Pairing: Sherlock/John
Rating: R
Summary: Five times John and Sherlock kissed because of a case and one time they kissed for real.
Words: 1300 (this part)
Notes: This is a little story I've been playing with and finally had to write down to get it out of my head so I can move on to other things.
Alternate Link: On AO3

Translation: Translated into Chinese by Avivatang here

Podfic by Helens78!: Places to download: Dreamwidth | LJ | Helens' Audific archive: MP3 or M4B | Tumblr post



One

Sherlock's phone buzzed and he lifted it to glance at the screen.

Ready. Set. Go.

He tucked the phone into the pocket of his track bottoms and started down the dirt path through the park, running at an easy pace. Three minutes later he rounded the corner into an open area and headed toward a stand of benches, slowing his pace slightly.

Five men clustered near a statue of St. Gregory, their dark suits making them a bit conspicuous in the park at this hour. One held a briefcase tightly at his side and raised a cigarette to his lips with his free hand. He blew a long stream of smoke into the air above him and nodded at something one of the other men said.

On one of the benches a man sat reading a newspaper, legs crossed, his face obscured by the page he held before him. Two teenage boys stood by the fountain; one held a football under one arm and gestured at his friend with other, apparently in the middle of a rather amusing tale.

All of this was observed during the two seconds it took Sherlock to run within a few yards of the men. He paid them no attention as he ran past; they eyed him warily for a second before dismissing him entirely.

Just as he neared the edge of the clearing, Sherlock grimaced and stumbled, falling to the ground with a strained cry, one hand clenching his chest.

"Oh my God!" one of the teenagers shouted, and the men in suits turned to gape as Sherlock thrashed on the dirt path for several more seconds before going still.

The man sitting on the bench dropped his paper and leapt to his feet. He dashed across the clearing and dropped to his knees at Sherlock's side.

"Are you all right? Sir? I'm a doctor, let me--" He broke off then, his eyes widening at the sight of Sherlock's eyes rolling back into his head. He pressed two fingertips to the pulse point in his neck and nodded once, then leaned across Sherlock and put an ear over his mouth, his eyes watching his chest. "Pulse is weak and he's not breathing."

"Is he going to die?" one of the teenagers asked as he drew closer, the football clutched against his chest. He fumbled with the strap of the rucksack on his shoulder and looked back over his shoulder at his friend, who seemed happy to keep his distance.

"Have you got a mobile?" the man asked him. "Call 999."

"I haven't got one. My mum took it away." The teenager looked stricken.

"One of you lot, then," the man said, turning his gaze to the men standing by the statue. "Don't just stand about. This man's life may be at stake!"

The men looked at each other, clearly panicked. The one with the briefcase fumbled in his pocket for his mobile.

"I'm dialing it now," he said.

"What are you doing?" one of the others hissed and batted his phone away. "Are you mad?"

"That's 500 quid, right there," the man retorted, scrambling for his mobile in the dirt. "Have some respect."

"Oh, for fuck's sake!" the doctor groaned, pulling his own mobile from his pocket and punching the number. He handed the phone to the teenager. "Tell them we need a paramedic. I'm starting rescue breathing."

He leaned down over Sherlock, his back to the men, and whispered, "Here goes nothing." He pinched Sherlock's nose shut, tilted his jaw upwards as he opened his mouth, and fit his own lips over Sherlock's in a not-quite seal. He took a deep breath through his nose and then blew part of it into Sherlock's mouth; Sherlock inhaled at the same moment, letting his chest rise sharply. John turned his head to look at Sherlock's chest as he exhaled. His lips formed numbers as he counted silently. Two fingers pressed against his neck again, checking his pulse. After several seconds, he pinched Sherlock's nose closed, retilted his chin to open the airway, and fake-breathed again.

They ought to have practiced this beforehand, but John had seemed oddly reluctant. It was a strange sensation: John's open mouth pressed against his own, lips touching in something almost like a kiss as they shared a breath. It was startlingly intimate. Perhaps that was why John had refused to practice?

"Oi, I think I heard a siren," the football-wielding teenager said. "They're coming. It sounds like the police as well."

"Go meet them," John said as Sherlock exhaled. "Tell them where we are."

The boy nodded and took off at a jog. John's lips pressed against Sherlock's again, and as Sherlock inhaled he couldn't help shifting a bit, just enough that their lips moved softly across each other. John turned his head and Sherlock's lips brushed his ear as he exhaled, and Sherlock could swear he felt him shiver slightly.

There was a quiet argument behind them and a scuffle of shoes.

"We've got to get out of here before the Met turn up."

"The briefcase! It’s gone!"

"What? Where the hell could it have gone?"

"It was here!" Panic seemed to be setting in now. "I set it down when you knocked my phone away and--"

"One of those kids, must've been."

"Who just ran to meet the cops?" A note of incredulity in that one.

"They just pinched your case, you dolt. They aren't going to the cops."

"Shit, that kid took my phone!" John said, looking around frantically. "Just fucking perfect. Try to do a good deed and look what it gets you." He shook his head in disgust and pressed his mouth against Sherlock's again, not fully pinching his nose closed this time. Sherlock inhaled through his nose, and somehow this last "breath" had seemed more like a kiss than any that had gone before.

"Let's split up," one of the men said. "They can't have gone far." The scuffle of feet grew quieter, and then the clearing was silent.

John looked over his shoulder. "I think they're gone."

"Don't get up yet," Sherlock whispered. "Wait until we hear from Kyle."

"I wasn't going to." John leaned over him again to give the impression he was still performing rescue breathing. This time his lips hovered a centimeter above Sherlock's. It was oddly disappointing.

A minute and three faux breaths later, Sherlock's phone buzzed. John dug it out of his pocket to glance at the screen, and immediately rolled his eyes. "Clear," he said, sitting back on his heels.

Sherlock plucked the phone from his hand.

Made our getaway, so you can stop snogging now. Meet you at the spot at the time.

"I told you it would work." Sherlock pushed to his feet and dusted himself off.

"My definition of this working would include us actually getting our hands on the contents of that briefcase before the day is out. Are you sure you can trust Kyle?"

"I trust that he wants to collect his payment, and he won't get a penny until he delivers the files in that briefcase to me."

John sighed and thrust a rucksack at him; Kyle's football-wielding accomplice, Alton, had dropped it when he came over to signal that Kyle had taken the briefcase. "I'd better get my phone back."

"As soon as he places some extraordinarily expensive calls, I imagine you will." He opened the rucksack and pulled out its contents: a neatly-folded change of clothes to aid his exit from the park. "See you at home, then?"

"Yeah." John glanced around the clearing once more before standing.

Sherlock watched him disappear around the bend in the path before turning to walk in the opposite direction.

*****

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Date: 2012-06-07 06:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] drinkingcocoa.livejournal.com
Greetings! Your fic stalker here, and that high-pitched sound you hear is my uncontrolled squeeing. I love that you do plot! This one is clever and spirited. "Snogging," heh. Sherlock as a jogger is a funny visual. And I loved the detail about the teenager saying his mother had confiscated his phone.

Date: 2012-06-08 03:57 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] emmagrant01.livejournal.com
Hee, thanks! This one has felt like a palate cleanser after all the Cure stuff I've been writing. I've been working on it when I needed a break and finally thought it would be fun to post some of it. ]

Sherlock jogging is kind of a funny visual, isn't it? :-P
From: [identity profile] pennswoods.livejournal.com
Greedy, greedy me wants more. I love UST so much and you've lit a spark in these two right here.

It also seems that Sherlock's POV continues to inspire you.
From: [identity profile] emmagrant01.livejournal.com
Thank you! The Sherlock POV is definitely fun, more fun than I expected. This story will have a weird sort of UST, which I desperately hope works!

Date: 2012-06-07 07:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pern-dragon.livejournal.com
I saw your tweet and instantly went and read it on AO3 (bookmarked!). You are a goddess and I love your brain SO MUCH. I need to get back to the latest Alternate scene post and enjoy it! <3<3<3

Date: 2012-06-08 03:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] emmagrant01.livejournal.com
Aw, thank you! I was sort of amazed at the response to this today, actually!

Date: 2012-06-07 07:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] yalublyutebya.livejournal.com
Haha! More please :-)

Date: 2012-06-08 03:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] emmagrant01.livejournal.com
It's coming! Thanks for reading. :-)

Date: 2012-06-07 08:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rte-175.livejournal.com
I read the description and thought to myself, "Oh, that sounds cute. I love 5+1 fics, especially ones with John and Sherlock kissing." And then I saw EMMAGRANT01 after it and thought: "ohmygodohmygodohmygod. I LOVE her!" So exciting to read more of your stuff and, as always, it is excellent!

Date: 2012-06-08 04:00 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] emmagrant01.livejournal.com
Thank you so much! I hope it lives up to expectations! ;-)

Date: 2012-06-07 08:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tarotemp.livejournal.com
Awesome job as always, Emma! Waiting on tenterhooks for the remaining chapters. <3

Date: 2012-06-08 04:00 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] emmagrant01.livejournal.com
Aw, thank you! :-D

Date: 2012-06-07 09:11 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] ladytory.livejournal.com
Yup, lovely as always! :) So glad I have another little fic set to follow!

Date: 2012-06-08 04:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] emmagrant01.livejournal.com
It's nice to have something little to work on at the moment. All of the Cure stuff has been so large and complicated, and I've been wanting to write a few one-shots. Well, this isn't exactly a one-shot, but still. ;-)

Thanks!

Date: 2012-06-07 09:45 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] gina87.livejournal.com
Great start! Can't wait for more!

Date: 2012-06-08 04:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] emmagrant01.livejournal.com
Thank you!

Date: 2012-06-07 09:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tea-for-lupin.livejournal.com
Oh oh. Oh oh! What an awesome surprise to wake up to this morning. This is fantastic, thoroughly IC - I can just see this as the sort of plan that Sherlock would come up with. Aw, John didn't want to practice? :) *squees*!!!! Love all the details about the Baker St Irregulars and the suits too. Desperate for more, as always...

Date: 2012-06-08 12:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] emmagrant01.livejournal.com
Wow, thank you so much! :-)

Date: 2012-06-07 09:55 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] angelbabe_cj
I managed to resist the urge to read this (due to WIP aversion) for several hours. I'm impressed with my own control.

This was so good. I love Kyle's snogging comment and the whole set up. Now I shall bounce around waiting for more. Although Sherlock as a jogger is just too amusing.

Date: 2012-06-08 12:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] emmagrant01.livejournal.com
It's going to be a pretty short WIP and it's mostly written, so no worries there, I hope. ;-)

Sherlock as a jogger amuses me too, I have to say.

Thank you!

Date: 2012-06-07 10:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jperceval.livejournal.com
Oooh, what a lovely surprise! A new fic to feed my addiction, and so intriguing too!

Date: 2012-06-08 12:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] emmagrant01.livejournal.com
Thank you! :-)

Date: 2012-06-07 10:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] opaljade.livejournal.com
I always feel a wee bit intimidated when I write a review for something I liked a lot (and that was obviously written by a talented writer) but here I go anyway... Er, I loved the first chapter of your story, it made me grin from ear to ear, and I can't wait to read more.

I'm also relatively new to this fandom, so I'm going to go ahead and friend you because I liked your take on WIPs and it seems like you have a few fics I might like to read.

Thanks for sharing your talent!
OJ

Date: 2012-06-08 12:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] emmagrant01.livejournal.com
I hope you know how much getting ANY comments means to a writer, let alone ones that are thoughtful! We live for it, seriously. Comment away. :-)

Thanks so much for reading!

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Date: 2012-06-07 11:21 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] bluebellanon
I like this beginning! I like how you manage to get ust in there whilst still having them kiss. :)

Date: 2012-06-08 12:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] emmagrant01.livejournal.com
That;'s going to be the big theme of this fic, if I can pull it off. :-D

Thanks so much!

Date: 2012-06-07 11:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mijeli.livejournal.com
OOohh, I like the way this starts. Looking forward to more :)

Date: 2012-06-08 12:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] emmagrant01.livejournal.com
Thank you!

Date: 2012-06-08 12:08 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tsuvi.livejournal.com
Yes! Love your Sherlock voice- especially the part where he is contemplating why John didn't want to practice before... Also, the slight shift Sherlock does so it is *almost* like a kiss. Perfect! Cant wait for more :-D

Date: 2012-06-08 12:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] emmagrant01.livejournal.com
Thank you so much! When I first got into this fandom, the idea of writing from Sherlock's POV seemed like an impossible task, but the more I do it, the more I enjoy it. I'm not sure it's any good, but I appreciate the vote of confidence!

Date: 2012-06-08 12:42 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mtyugi.livejournal.com
WAAAAH!!! NEED MORE NOOOWW!!!!! ;3 This is great!!!!!! :D *does happy dance*

Date: 2012-06-08 12:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] emmagrant01.livejournal.com
Thank you so much!

Date: 2012-06-08 01:18 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] holyfant.livejournal.com
Yum. Yes please.

Date: 2012-06-08 12:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] emmagrant01.livejournal.com
Writing little fics can be such a fun break, can't it? ;-)

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Date: 2012-06-08 02:45 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mijan.livejournal.com
Heeee... I can totally see them doing this. Mouth-to-mouth... such a perfect excuse. I can't wait to see what else you come up with.

Date: 2012-06-08 12:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] emmagrant01.livejournal.com
Oh yay, you're reading this! I'm having so much fun writing in this fandom. :-D

Date: 2012-06-08 03:34 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] yaycoffee.livejournal.com
Loved it!

Date: 2012-06-08 12:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] emmagrant01.livejournal.com
Thank you!

Date: 2012-06-08 04:43 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jemariel.livejournal.com
Heeeeeeeee, I like where this begins and I think I'm gonna like where it goes :-) Looking forward to the continuation!

PS: Clever set-up for the case! Especially bringing in the Irregulars. I always admire a good case-setting.

Date: 2012-06-08 03:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] emmagrant01.livejournal.com
Thank you so much! :-D

Date: 2012-06-08 05:06 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kelspots.livejournal.com
I know you just posted that you enjoy them, but I usually don't read WIP stories - been disappointed by too many abandoned ones, I suppose. But I do love a good 5+1 and when I saw who was writing it, well I had to come and read :) I liked the set-up and John refusing to practice.

Thanks for writing!

Date: 2012-06-08 03:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] emmagrant01.livejournal.com
Thanks for giving it a shot, then! It's not going to be terribly long, maybe 10K words tops, and it's half-way written and otherwise all outlined. Hopefully it won't be too long of a wait. :-)

Date: 2012-06-08 05:52 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] freckles42.livejournal.com
IRELAND APPROVES

Date: 2012-06-08 03:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] emmagrant01.livejournal.com
Thanks! :-D

Date: 2012-06-08 06:01 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] treelight.livejournal.com
Lovely! Waiting to see more!

Date: 2012-06-08 03:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] emmagrant01.livejournal.com
Thank you!

Date: 2012-06-08 06:01 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] winstonmom.livejournal.com
I am so glad this is 1 of 5 because this was so good.
I've fallen in love with Sherlock and this is just what I need it.
Looking forward to the next ;0)

Date: 2012-06-08 03:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] emmagrant01.livejournal.com
Yay! I'm more than a little in love with Sherlock myself, heh. Thanks!

Date: 2012-06-08 07:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aprilstarchild.livejournal.com
Yaaay! Another story!

Date: 2012-06-08 03:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] emmagrant01.livejournal.com
I know, right? I haven't been this full of fic ideas in ages. :-D Thanks for reading!
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