emmagrant01: (Harry/Draco in bed)
emmagrant01 ([personal profile] emmagrant01) wrote2005-09-11 08:21 pm
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Ficlet: Pillow Talk #5

Title: Pillow Talk #5
Author: Emma Grant
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Harry/Draco
Summary: Vignettes from a relationship.
Length: Short (636 words).
Note 1: Written for [livejournal.com profile] anise_anise, who is loved muchly. ♥
Note 2: Part of a series of short fics written out of order, all centered around a theme. There will be five in all. (This is the fourth.)

Start with the first one.




Draco loved the taste of Harry. He loved the way he smelled, even when he was sweaty and dirty -- and sometimes, especially then. He loved the way he sounded when Draco was making love to him: little gasps and humming sounds, rarely complete words.

And then there were moments like this.

He had Harry's cock in his mouth, sucked down to the point where he was nearly gagging, and Harry was shifting his hips and stroking Draco's head. And Draco knew exactly what it meant.

He came off Harry's prick and teased his balls with the tip of his tongue. Harry groaned and shifted his hips up a little more.

Draco sighed and sat back on his elbows. After a few seconds, Harry's head popped up.

"Why'd you stop?"

Draco let his fingers play over the inside of Harry's thigh. "What do you want me to do?"

Harry blinked at him for a moment, and then blushed. "I liked what you were doing."

"And what was I doing?"

"You were... licking me." Harry's head fell back against the pillow.

"Do you want me to keep licking you like that?" Draco asked, grinning.

"Yes," Harry replied. The word sounded like it was lodged in his throat.

Draco leaned in and trailed his tongue over Harry's balls again. After about a minute, Harry moved again.

It was very hard not to laugh. "Do you want me to lick you somewhere else?"

The sigh he heard from above him was one of exasperation. "Draco…"

Draco crawled up and stretched himself out over Harry, who was now hiding his face with his hands. "Why can't you say it?"

"I don't know," Harry mumbled. "Why do you want me to say it?"

"Because we have been together for twelve fucking years!" Draco laughed. "We've done just about everything there is to do in bed, and for some ridiculous reason, you're still embarrassed to ask for what you want."

"I know it doesn't make any sense," Harry replied. "I just am."

Draco tugged at his wrists, and Harry reluctantly allowed his hands to be pulled away from his face. Draco kissed the tip of his nose and smiled. "I won't do it again until you ask me, specifically."

Harry winced. "Oh, come on--"

"I'll even help you," Draco said. "Just repeat after me: Draco, I want you to lick my arsehole."

Harry pulled a pillow over his head.

"Come on," Draco laughed, taking advantage of the opportunity to tickle Harry. "You do it to me all the time. If you can do it, why can't you say it?"

"I don't know," was Harry's muffled reply.

Draco tugged at the pillow, but only managed to uncover one ear. "Tell me you want me to fuck your arse with my tongue," he whispered into it. "Tell me you want me to lick and suck your hole, and stick my tongue in as far as it will go, while you wank yourself. I know it's what you want, but I want to hear you say it."

The next thing Draco knew, he was on his back with Harry's tongue in his mouth, sliding against his own. Draco moaned then -- they hardly ever kissed like this any more -- and let himself be ravaged. Harry soon moved to his throat, which allowed Draco to make a few unintelligible sounds of his own.

Harry worked his way down Draco's torso, and then roughly rolled him over. Draco felt the cheeks of his arse being parted and Harry's damp breath against his arsehole.

"Oh god," he groaned.

"How about instead of telling you," Harry whispered, and then paused to lick at the taut skin under his mouth, "I show you?"

"God, I love you," Draco said, and then found himself quite incapable of saying another word.




fin


Go to the next part.

Note: I have no idea how the hell the last three of these have turned out to have the exact same number of words! :-P

[identity profile] rosequoll.livejournal.com 2005-09-12 01:37 am (UTC)(link)
*melt* I haven't ever commented on your fics before, but I read almost every one, and at least every once since I added your journal to my list...

<3

[identity profile] anise-anise.livejournal.com 2005-09-12 01:37 am (UTC)(link)
*pouncessnogsmolests* OMG EMMA!!!! *smooshes hard* That was brilliant!!! I love it so damn much!!!! Thankyouthankyouthankyou. *loves and loves and loves* You've been so damn good to me, It is very much appreciated. I can't express how highly I think of you. *attacks again*

[identity profile] dragonfly-lily.livejournal.com 2005-09-12 01:43 am (UTC)(link)
Egads that was hot! Deliciously, wonderfully, absolutly hot!

[identity profile] knic26.livejournal.com 2005-09-12 02:07 am (UTC)(link)
Hot, Hot, Hot. I guess we all learn best by hands on demonstration. That was lovely!

[identity profile] wendy.livejournal.com 2005-09-12 02:11 am (UTC)(link)
Guh, do I identify with Harry in this. When he plants the pillow over his face I died laughing....been there, done that.

Thanks Ms. Emma!

[identity profile] luci0logy.livejournal.com 2005-09-12 02:53 am (UTC)(link)
Sometimes, even after 20 years, saying what you want does not come easily no matter how inhibited you think you are. Loved the 'dirty talk' in this and I like the way you subtly slip in references to how long they have been together: 10 years, 5 years, 12 years - it gives this series depth.
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[identity profile] pombagira.livejournal.com 2005-09-12 03:19 am (UTC)(link)
two things.. this was great.. i am loveing this series of ficlets.. they certainly brighten my day.. *glee!!*

and also one of my friends posted a letter thingo on his journal http://www.livejournal.com/users/allyn/1053451.html which you might find amusing... teheh

*bounces around!!*

[identity profile] muerteoctomonky.livejournal.com 2005-09-12 03:26 am (UTC)(link)
You kill me. You kill me from a million miles away. *iz ded* This was...veeery good. *quivers*

[identity profile] wook77.livejournal.com 2005-09-12 03:43 am (UTC)(link)
This one made me sigh and giggle. I liked the fact that Harry can't say what he wants, even after 12 years. That just seems "so Harry".

The one part that made me sad - Draco moaned then -- they hardly ever kissed like this any more -- and let himself be ravaged. How absolutely sad that they don't kiss so much anymore.

[identity profile] snottygrrl.livejournal.com 2005-09-12 04:08 am (UTC)(link)
another gem. you are Teh Amazing woman.

thanks for the afternoon break (i'm in nz). ♥

[identity profile] rachfrank.livejournal.com 2005-09-12 04:14 am (UTC)(link)
Oh this is my favorite one so far. I love the ending. So incredibly hot and fluffy at the same time.

[identity profile] bibliokat.livejournal.com 2005-09-12 04:22 am (UTC)(link)
Oooo, very nice!

(I figured that was a little better than just plain "guh";)

[identity profile] silentauror.livejournal.com 2005-09-12 04:38 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, I love it! I love all of your pillow talk stories!! :) So much with the happy! ♥♥♥

[identity profile] eireinn.livejournal.com 2005-09-12 04:47 am (UTC)(link)
Poor embarrassed Harry. :)

I really like this series. The way it's done out of order is great...so different.

[identity profile] pocketroxy.livejournal.com 2005-09-12 04:52 am (UTC)(link)
This is so fun and so hot! these ficlets are magic!

[identity profile] seaghostsoaring.livejournal.com 2005-09-12 04:53 am (UTC)(link)
Aw, Harry's shy. I love your Draco <3

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[identity profile] pallojaketju.livejournal.com 2005-09-12 06:11 am (UTC)(link)
Reading this was a perfect way to start a day! *happy sigh*

[identity profile] oboros.livejournal.com 2005-09-12 06:11 am (UTC)(link)
Holy.... !

the shyness factor! *relates*

bah! *hides*

[identity profile] 0ri.livejournal.com 2005-09-12 09:12 am (UTC)(link)
ooh this is so cute :D i like how your fics are so more realistic than most other ones..

but why did we go from 3 to 5?

[identity profile] spark-of-chaos.livejournal.com 2005-09-12 09:21 am (UTC)(link)
I like that series really much. The back and forth shifting time-wise, the intensity in some and the feeling in other ficlets; it shows such a great view of a working relationship, with the ups and downs, the hot and heavy moments. A magnificent work :)

[identity profile] anansay.livejournal.com 2005-09-12 10:45 am (UTC)(link)
*sigh*
I like these little things. Just enough to get the ol' heart going. :) without going through something too long. I DO like the long ones, but these... yeah. Keep writing them! :)
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